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neigh

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The End
« on: October 16, 2017, 12:19:03 pm »
Jackson
*sit on railing, with Amber in my lap*

Amber
"Put me down."

Jackson
*jump off*

Amber
*scream and sqirm*

Jackson
*accidentally let go of her*

Amber
*grab onto the bars holding up the railing, with one hand, tightly gripping Horsie with the other, scream*

Jackson
*fall to the first story*

Amber
*can't hold on much longer, arm and blistering hand getting more and more painful, cry in fear and pain*

Kevin
*rush, hearing her scream, reach through bars and grab Amber's arm* "Help!"

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Re: The End
« Reply #1 on: October 18, 2017, 12:05:28 am »
Dallas hears a loud commotion and he runs straight out of his room to see what it is.

  "What's going on!?" He exclaimed.

His eyes widened as he saw Kevin desperately holding onto Amber, trying to pull her up.  Dallas ran straight away to help.  Grabbing Amber's other arm, the boy tries to lift her up.

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Re: The End
« Reply #2 on: October 18, 2017, 03:25:25 pm »
Jackson
*the life runs out of my body*

Kevin
*pull Amber up with Dallas's help, set her on the floor*

Amber
*tightly wrap both arms around Horsie, continuing crying, clutch him tightly with the hand I had been holding onto him with, start to grab him with the hand that I held the rail with but notice that this hand really hurts, scared to look and see what happened to Jackson*
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Re: The End
« Reply #3 on: October 19, 2017, 03:54:56 pm »
Once they get her up, relief runs throughout Dallas's body.

  "I'll go find one of the adults," he says as he stood up.

His body tensed back up.  Dallas run back over to the railing, seeing Jackson's body on the ground.  His face went pale as a cold sweat ran down his face.  The boy ran down to Jackson as fast as he could.

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Re: The End
« Reply #4 on: October 19, 2017, 04:22:18 pm »
Jackson
*dead*

Amber
*still crying*

Kevin
*wrap arm around Amber, trying to comfort her*

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Re: The End
« Reply #5 on: October 20, 2017, 03:52:02 am »
Dallas reached Jackson's body.  He was horrified.  The boy tried to check for a pulse and it was gone.  Dallas didn't know Jackson well, if at all, but he still tried desperately to see if there was something that he could do.  There was a sharp pain in his heart as tears started to fall down his cheeks.  The boy decided to give up.

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Re: The End
« Reply #6 on: October 20, 2017, 11:26:36 am »
Amber
*squirm away from Jackson, crawl to the edge and look over, scream in terror*

Kevin
*look over, gasp, grab Amber, pull her away from the view, wish my mom was home, yell*  "Ms. China!"